Walt: using adjective, verbs, similies
and rhyming words
I saw the leaves flying off the trees
Viciously Like a plaster coming off knees.
I saw branches were breaking off the trees just like the leaves falling
the trees.
the trees.
Friday 13 April 2018
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Hi Timote, its Ryan here from Awahono School. I like how your poem rhymes and it gives you a good picture about what is going on. I like how you have wrote that the branches were breaking off the trees which means it was a windy day. I noticed that your writing was off the page so when you publish your writing make sure it is CTRL shift V. How long did it take you to make this? From Ryan
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